Feedback of Third cut

                                                      

This is the feedback for our third cut of our title sequence, overall it is good feedback with only minor improvements on the cameras smoothness in the movements, there was confusion about the door number so we have decided to change that to a full door shot.   

Feedback of Second cut

This is the feedback for our second cut of our title sequence

The feedback was good all round with only minor point to reshoot and Editing advice

the feedback suggested that everyone understood our narrative but one bit of the sequence suggests that the male character may be trying to kill the female character  

Pitch take 2 feedback

pitch feedback

This is the feedback we got on the pitch for our film we got good feedback all round with a few improvements to be made to the pitch

the biggest suggestion for improvements was that we needed to specify what gender of target audience we are aiming our film at
we also needed look at fonts for our title sequence and figure out how we want our film to end
we were also asked to revise the release date to the film or at least explain more as to why we chose the date