pitch feedback

This is the feedback we got on the pitch for our film we got good feedback all round with a few improvements to be made to the pitch

the biggest suggestion for improvements was that we needed to specify what gender of target audience we are aiming our film at
we also needed look at fonts for our title sequence and figure out how we want our film to end
we were also asked to revise the release date to the film or at least explain more as to why we chose the date